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The day after

Darkness, darkness was the only thing Spyro could see. He looked around, but there was nothing to be seen, not the slightest glimmer of light and the sound seemed just as absent as the light. He thought for a moment, and remembered his attempt to mend the world back together "Did I fail?". But at that moment there was a sound. It was a faint sound, but a sound none the less. He heard someone call out his name "Spyro?". He recognized the voice, but he couldn't put his paw on who it was, but then the voice called again "Spyro? Spyro, wake up" this time it was louder and he recognized who it belonged to and all his fears quickly faded away.

He opened his eyes and saw the dragoness standing above him with her muzzle only inches away from his own. He blushed a bit, but was taken by surprise when Cynder began to hug him. "Oh Spyro, I was worried you'd never wake up". Spyro felt something wet on his neck and noticed that the dragoness was crying. "It's okay, I'm awake now" he said, trying to cheer her up. Cynder still sobbed, but she felt better after hearing Spyro's kind and calm voice. 

Spyro hugged Cynder back trying to calm her even more and when she finally calmed down Spyro asked her what happened. She told him that after he used his power to save the world he fell unconscious and she had been forced to carry him out of there. "I'm sorry, I didn't mean for you to carry me.". "There's nothing to be sorry about" Cynder said. "You just saved the whole world, it's no wonder you fell unconscious". "Maybe but still".

Cynder got off of Spyro so that he could stand up and it was then that Spyro noticed the surroundings. The sun had risen and was shining brightly upon the land, the leaves in the oak-tree above them was calmly swaying in motion with the wind and the forest behind them was full of life as well as the sound of birds singing. Cynder noticed how he stared and said "It's beautiful isn't it?". Spyro turned around to answer her and when he saw the dragoness whose black and red scales shone in the light he felt a sudden urge to say "as you", but restrained himself. Instead he answered "Yeah,it is", while blushing a bit.

He thought back to when they where at the heart of the planet. He had thought that he heard the dragoness say "I love you", but he wasn't sure if it was just his imagination and he also didn't have the currage to tell her what he felt incase it really only was his imagination. So instead he came up with an idea. "Hey Cynder.". "Yeah?". "My memory is a bit blurry, but I think you said something to me when I was just about to use my power". Cynder blushed a bit and said "Yeah, I did". Spyro's heart began to pump wildly, "So she did really say that?". He had noticed her blushing and it gave him the courage he needed.

"Did you say, I love you?". Cynder began to blush evan more and nodded. Spyro began to blush as well and then he said "I...I love you too". A big smile began to form on Cynder's face and she asked "Really?". "Yes I do, more than anything" he answerd, smiling as well. Cynder jumped up on his back and began to hug him again, Spyro was yet again taken by surprise and fell onto his side.

He turned around to see Cynder smiling down at him. He noticed her sweet emerald eyes and he felt like he was drowning in their beauty. Cynder moved closer and their muzzles touched. She pressed her lips against his and Spyro melted into the kiss. Cynder had never seen or experienced love before, but even if she didn't really know what she did it felt right and oh so good.

Spyro on the otherhand who had grown up in the dragonfly-village had seen many couples and he knew that what they did was called kissing, but he had never thought that he would experience it himself. He had never really been attracted to the girls back then and he never understood why, but now he knew that it was obviously because of the fact that he wasn't even a dragonfly to begin with. And now he'd never have to think of that again, because now he had found a girl he likes and the right one at that. When they ended the kiss they where both blushing and it seemed like they had both enjoyed it. "Wow, that was amazing" Cynder said in awe. "Yeah it was." Spyro answered, still feeling the butterflies in his stomach.

They lay still while staring at each other for a while, just enjoying each other's company. But then Cynder noticed that Spyro was struggling to keep his eyes open, so she asked "Are you tired?". "Yeah, I think it's because I used up a lot of my energy before". "That wouldn't surprise me" She answered. "So...is it okay if I fall asleep here?" Spyro asked. "As long as I can sleep beside you, then yes" Cynder said with a smile on her face. "I wouldn't mind that at all" Spyro answered with a smile of his own. And so they both fell asleep while hugging each other, dreaming about their future life together.
(Edit : I just fixed some small mistakes and also rewrote/added parts of the story and I think it'll make the story better then before ^^ )

Hi, This is something that I've wanted to try for some time. Writing isn't what I do best, but I tried to make this good and if you find anything, like wrong kind of "formulations", bad grammar or spelling just tell me and I will try to fix it :)

Hope you like it ^^

And don't forget to take a look at my latest short ;) [link] - SxC - An unexpected turn of events
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charok-destroyer Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
The third paragraph third line at the end of the line you put sry instead of sorry.

Other that that love the story
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh...shit

Well, fixed that now :P

And thanks ^^ Glad you did
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charok-destroyer Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
Your welcome
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Student General Artist
^^
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Imwritten Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
Hey just read the story, and it's a very good short story.

I did noticed some spelling mistakes, but I have noticed you're good at explaining details, without boring it down, which some can find it difficult to do.

So nice work on the story. :)
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Okay, thanks :)

So, what was it you found? I wrote it around midnight, so i was pretty tired. Guess that's why i missed stuff. Because i thought i checked everything :P

But if you can, tell me what i missed so i can fix it :)
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Imwritten Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
OK then, here is the mistakes I have notice:

3rd paragraph line 1, it should be happened, missed an e.

3rd paragraph line 4, maybe, not maby.

5th paragraph line 2 and 5, you said currage, not courage.

6th paragraph line 1, even, not evan.

7th paragraph line 2, lipps, one to many p's

8th paragraph line 4 (also paragraph 9 line 2, you have put becouse, the o is meant to have an a instead.

8th paragraph line 5, you put enyojed, you just need to move the j and y around and it be right.

Sorry for the list, but I was the same when I started writing (and even now I can sometimes make a load of mistakes :(), so don't beat yourself about it.
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Okay, it should be fixed now, was a bitch to do on the phone though xD *Zoom in, zoomed out, has to zoom in again*... :P

I also noticed that i had written eachother together at one point so fixed that as well :)

As i said, because, even and maybe is words i have problems with :P and i can never remember how enjoyed is spelled... But i am starting to think of it more and more, so it was partly because it was in the middle of the night i guess.

Thanks anyways ^^ glad you helped

And don't worry, i was never really good at writing and i had a hard time getting just an E at tests in school.
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Imwritten Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
No problem, glad that I could help :)
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
^^
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh, okay, damnit xD I thought i removed every "evan" and "becouse" :P

Those + "maby" are words i mess up usually :P But yeah, thanks, gonna fix that right away ^^
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DrawingSpyro Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Naww :la:
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student General Artist
:)
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BLU0NI Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome story!
:star::star::star::star::star:
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Thx :) Though, havn't you already read it? xD
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BLU0NI Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
... So?
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student General Artist
just asking :) Thx for the fav and all :)
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BLU0NI Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome
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skaidragon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student General Artist
så många känlor!! jag börjar nästan gråta höhöhöh och jag kommer inte ihåg när jag gjorde det senast
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w0lfix Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:P då lär du få hämta en hink vid nästa del för nu har ja lärt mig att tänka på känslor å liknande mer ;)
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skaidragon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student General Artist
jo kanke för jag är ingen känslolö maskin som nästan alla andra!!om spyro äger" i feel so alone!!"
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skaidragon Featured By Owner May 12, 2012  Student General Artist
esset är lite failat och det ska stå känlolös maskin
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DestructiveNight Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool and cute ;3

a few spelling mistakes
but that's ok :D
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist
yeah i noticed when i read it through before :P i'll try to fix that tomorrow or something :)

Thx anyway :D
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DestructiveNight Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
cool :D
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Razvan563 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student Writer
Well is a nice Prologue I must say and I know this will be a great story, but be care full with the First Person 'I' is read like that not like 'i' and you have som w word merges as well, but except those small ones is a great one :)
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Student General Artist
yeah i tend to miss the "I"s becouse it's not the same in Swedish, then it's just a small "i" if it's not the first word in a sentence. And could you tell me what those merges is? i will try to remember them to next time and also fix the small mistakes like the "i"

And thanks alot for the comment, really appreciate it :)
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Razvan563 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student Writer
Your welcome and don't worry about mistakes I have a lot of them indeed. :)
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student General Artist
yeah, people can read it without too much trouble it's fine right? :)
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Razvan563 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah is not a very big problem is just that if you want to ever publish it you need to know those small grammar things that's all :)
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student General Artist
yeah
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Razvan563 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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DiamondXLion Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So sweet! :) I think you should continue and make it a story.
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student General Artist
Thx :) well, if more people think so i might do it, but right now i feel like i don't have the time so i will probebly only do that if many people want me to.
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But who knows? maby i will anyway. "Only time can tell" (0o0) <--- wtf is that? x)
\o/
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DiamondXLion Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
Yeah, I see what you mean.
:D I think you should do it!
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student General Artist
And thats verry nice to hear :D
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DiamondXLion Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student General Artist
hey, i notice in your (i don't know what it's called but undernieth your comment) it says that you like eragon right? Have you read the last book?
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DiamondXLion Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's called the signature and you can make once yourself in the settings.
Yes, I am a big fan of eragon, but I have not read the last book sadly.
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Student General Artist
yeah i know that i can change the signature couse i have one myself :P but k, now i know what it's called :) thx.

And k, i got the book from my mom today so i just wanted to see what you thought of it, if you had read it that is. But k guess i will have to find out myself :) though it's 905 pages long so it will take a while x)
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Student General Artist
k that became kinda wierd :/ it didn't look like that when i wrote it but...yeah yeah
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darktimcampy Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Student General Artist
woaw awesome :D
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Student General Artist
you really think so? :)
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darktimcampy Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Student General Artist
yup why i lying?
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w0lfix Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Student General Artist
don't know :P but btw look at the picture on the top again ;) i changed it to something better i just made
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